True
identity is a clash
between
resistance and conformity
it is the
solidarity
between
tear that falls
and tear
held back,
the
perennial struggle
between
hope and despair
each
seeking to stay
one step
ahead of the other;
true
identity is multi-colored
and yet
blind to color,
it is a
cry, a shout
and soft
word comfort;
it does
not unfurl banner
mumble
slogan
or stamp
itself
in
manifesto, declaration
and
statement;
it affirms
in silence
and lives
regardless
of
naming.
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if we are expressing our personality, or character, is it done in silence?....and how do we know "true identity".....if it isn't projected with action?....True..is descriptive here, , which is an adjective word...but...it is not the action word to say, a cry or shout?....tho when you start with true identities, there lies your adverb....but identity is Noun....yes...maybe best suited title would be, in truth of identity....and of course, I could be missing something???
ReplyDeleteDear Anonymous, you are missing quite a bit. There's no need to dissect and analyze a beautiful poem in this manner.
Deletethank you for your reply...my question is, what am I missing?...that is what I am wanting answered....to enlighten me of my missing ability, no..but to enlighten me of what I "missed" ?..yes....I patiently await your version, then in laymans terms of this beautiful piece....I thank you..:D
DeleteThanks, Malinda. Strikes home.
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